← Back to The Long Wake
SHIP YEAR −10 — Prologue

SHIP YEAR −10 — Prologue

A The Long Wake Story · SHIP YEAR −10

At the shipyard, LW-02 becomes autonomous while LW-03 is still a lattice of tests, banks and unfinished systems. Elias, Sera and a child named Kai stand at the edge of departure, where an interstellar ark stops being a place one can simply reach.

2255 CE

LW-03 — SHIP YEAR −10

Elias Venn could not see all of LW-02.

No one at his level could.

From the Axial Transfer Gallery, he could see only part of the hub, a section of the central spine, and the shadow of one rotor moving across the dock lighting. The rest of the ship disappeared beyond the shipyard structure, behind trusses, service conduits, and assembly arms.

It was enough.

Scale worked precisely through absence.

You looked at one piece of the structure and knew the rest stretched for kilometers.

“Bank C again,” Elias said.

A response appeared on his tablet:

ISOLATION TEST: PASS

CROSS-FEED: CLOSED

THERMAL BACKUP: AVAILABLE

Elias moved the result to the next item.

LW-03 was not yet a ship in the sense that LW-02 was a ship.

It was thousands of closed tasks.

Hull sections.

Installations.

Stasis banks.

Bulkhead penetrations.

Parts lists.

Numbered containers.

People who came to work every morning and added another small “done” to a thing that, ten years from now, was supposed to leave all of them behind.

Elias was twenty-four and worked on integrating the isolation systems for the cryogenic banks.

It sounded more important than it was.

Most of his day was spent checking whether something one person had designed, another had built, and a third team had connected actually isolated itself when it was supposed to.

On LW-02, the arrangement was simpler.

Larger banks.

Larger shared boundaries.

Less separation.

Block II was not supposed to repeat that solution.

Not because LW-02 was bad.

The first two ships had simply taught the program that thirty thousand sleeping people should not be so easy to place inside one common failure.

Elias moved to the next test.

“Bank D.”

The system replied:

READY

Beyond the glass of the Axial Gallery, one of LW-02’s docking arms moved.

Slowly.

So slowly that for a moment it looked as if nothing was happening.

Only when the line of light between the ship and the dock structure widened by several meters did Elias realize he was watching one of the last physical contacts between the ark and the shipyard.

Someone behind him said:

“Three minutes to release.”

Elias turned.

Sera Kade stood at the transfer terminal with a duty kit strapped to her thigh. Her hair was pulled tight, the sleeves of her coveralls rolled to the elbows.

“I thought you were on the departure sequence,” Elias said.

“I am.”

“Then why are you here?”

“Because the departure sequence is here.”

She pointed at the terminal.

“Half the things you call ‘the ship’ are still part of the dock today.”

“Only half?”

“I’m an optimist.”

Elias looked at her.

“That’s a bad sign.”

“Not for the ship.”

The display above the entrance changed.

LW-02 FINAL SUPPORT DISCONNECT

T−00:02:41

Sera checked her list.

“Yours?”

“C and D passed.”

“Holdfast?”

Elias nodded.

Sera looked through the glass.

“Ten years from now you’ll be looking at this from the other side.”

“Don’t rush it.”

“I don’t set the calendar.”

“Yet.”

“Never.”

She said it without regret.

Like someone who accepted the difference between influence and control.

Elias went back to the terminal.

“What do you need?”

“Confirmation that your next test won’t block the transfer gallery after release.”

“It won’t.”

“Signature.”

She handed him the tablet.

Elias pressed his identifier to it.

Sera took the device and walked away.

No goodbye.

No “see you in ten years.”

They had a shift.

LW-02 was leaving.

LW-03 still had to be built.

When the last power cable was disconnected, no one in the gallery applauded.

One icon simply went dark.

EXTERNAL POWER: OFF

Then another.

DOCK LIFE SUPPORT: DISCONNECTED

Then:

ARK INTERNAL SYSTEMS: AUTONOMOUS

Elias read them one by one.

Not because they were new to him.

Because he knew this was the first and last time he would see these exact lines referring to this exact ship.

LW-02 had its own power.

Its own atmosphere.

Its own banks.

Its own stores.

Its own hundreds of people awake and tens of thousands who were already asleep.

The shipyard was no longer necessary.

It was a moment less spectacular than undocking.

And more final.

Outside the glass, the service arms began to withdraw.

One.

Then another.

Then a third.

Each vanished from view and left empty space behind it.

Elias remembered that, as a child, he had imagined the departure of an interstellar ship as an explosion.

Light.

Thunder.

Something instantaneous.

Reality was a procedure.

In vacuum, nothing roared.

A city simply stopped being attached.

Kai was waiting on the other side of the gallery barrier.

Elias noticed him only after he finished the Bank D test.

The nine-year-old wore a yellow visitor band and an oversized station coverall with the sleeves rolled twice.

A family-program chaperone stood beside him.

Kai stayed as close to the glass as the line on the floor allowed.

Elias walked over.

“Weren’t you supposed to be in the observation sector?”

Kai did not take his eyes off LW-02.

“You can’t see anything from there.”

“You can’t see all of it from here either.”

“Exactly.”

Elias looked at him.

“Exactly what?”

Kai pointed at the hub.

“If you can’t see all of it, then it’s bigger.”

Elias snorted.

“Very scientific.”

Kai shrugged.

“You can’t see all of it either.”

“No.”

“And you’ll fly on one just like it?”

“Not just like it.”

Kai finally turned his head.

“Bigger?”

“I don’t know.”

“Better?”

Elias hesitated.

“Different.”

“That means better.”

“It means somebody tried to learn something.”

Kai accepted the answer without comment.

After a moment, he asked:

“How many are sleeping in there?”

Elias looked through the glass.

“A lot.”

“More than there are people here?”

“A lot more.”

“Then how do they know when to wake them?”

“The ship knows.”

Kai frowned.

“By itself?”

“Not entirely.”

“Then who?”

Elias wanted to answer.

Instead, a state-change tone sounded through the gallery.

FINAL MECHANICAL HOLD — RELEASED

Everyone instinctively looked toward LW-02.

Kai too.

The question went unanswered.

That was better.

After the final mechanical restraint released, LW-02 did not jump away.

There was no dramatic motion.

For the first few seconds, you could have sworn it was still stationary.

Only the markers on the glass showed the change.

SEPARATION: 2.4 M

4.1 M

7.8 M

The hub moved away from the dock.

Space opened between it and the shipyard structure where, a minute earlier, the transfer arms had been.

Elias knew their numbers.

He knew which line carried oxygen.

Which carried water.

Which carried data.

Which was emergency.

Now all of them ended here.

LW-02 had only what it had taken with it.

Another item appeared on the display:

DEPARTURE RECOVERY WINDOW: OPEN

Kai read it.

“They can still come back?”

Elias looked at him.

“Yes.”

“Then why are they leaving?”

“Because they’re not going in order to come back.”

Kai accepted that with the same seriousness children use for answers adults cannot explain properly.

“But they can.”

“For now.”

LW-02 kept moving away for the next several hours.

The gallery emptied.

People went back to work.

Some returned to LW-03 testing.

Others began dismantling infrastructure LW-02 no longer needed.

Others went back to ordinary shifts.

There was no ceremony after the ceremony.

There was a list of things to do.

Elias finished Bank E.

Then F.

Stopped for a meal.

Came back.

At nineteen hundred station time, LW-02 was still visible.

Smaller.

More clearly separated from the dock.

It was no longer part of the shipyard landscape.

It was an object in space.

At twenty-one hundred, Sera returned to the gallery.

This time without a tablet.

She stood beside Elias.

“You’re still here?”

“I’m on shift.”

“We’re all on shift.”

On the display:

DEPARTURE RECOVERY WINDOW: 00:18:12

Sera read it.

“Eighteen minutes.”

“Yes.”

“Is anyone talking to them?”

“All the time.”

“About what?”

“I don’t know.”

Sera looked at him.

“Strange.”

“What?”

“We can still talk to them, and in a moment we won’t be able to simply go after them.”

Elias did not answer.

That was exactly what he had been unable to name.

Not silence.

Not disconnection.

Not death.

Something worse in its ordinariness.

Contact remained.

Reachability was disappearing.

The countdown fell below five minutes.

No one raised their voice.

No one began counting aloud.

There was no need.

When the timer reached zero, the status changed.

DEPARTURE RECOVERY WINDOW: CLOSED

NOMINAL RETURN: NOT PLANNED

That was all.

LW-02 still replied.

Telemetry still flowed.

The people aboard were still alive.

The shipyard could still speak to them.

Only now, “return” was no longer an ordinary operational verb.

Elias stared at the words.

Sera said:

“So that’s it.”

“Yes.”

“I thought it would be different.”

“How?”

“Louder.”

Elias looked through the glass.

LW-02 was a point that could no longer be mistaken for part of the shipyard.

“In vacuum, everything is quieter.”

Sera smiled.

“That was almost poetic.”

“Don’t repeat it.”

“Never.”

She turned.

“Tomorrow you’ve got Banks G and H.”

“I know.”

“Block II.”

“I know.”

“Distributed.”

“I know.”

“Better.”

Elias looked at her.

“Different.”

Sera snorted.

“In ten years we’ll see.”

She walked away.

This time Elias said nothing.

Beyond the glass, LW-02 kept receding.

And around it, the emptiness was already larger than anything the shipyard could still attach to it.

Over the following weeks, LW-02 stopped being something that could be seen without assistance.

Then it stopped being something you could point to.

It remained as telemetry.

Messages.

Status reports.

Data packets.

People who still existed, although they were no longer a place you could travel to after your shift.

Elias went back to Bank G.

Then H.

Then the next ones.

LW-03 grew.

Sections were sealed.

Open trusses received hull plating.

Cables disappeared behind covers.

The first stasis banks went through full isolation tests.

Every day the ship was a little less of a construction site.

A little more of something that would one day leave.

Ten years seemed like a very long time then.

2265 CE

LW-03 — SHIP YEAR 0

The barrier opened after the green confirmation.

Elias presented his identifier.

DEPARTURE AUTHORIZATION: ACCEPTED

For one second, he did not move.

On the other side of the glass stood several dozen people.

Not a crowd.

Not a ceremony.

People from the program.

Technicians.

Families.

Those who were staying.

Some watched Holdfast.

Others watched the people crossing over.

Sera was already on the departure side.

She waited at the next checkpoint.

“Venn.”

Elias looked at her.

“What?”

“Either you’re coming in, or you’re blocking the passage.”

Elias stepped through.

The barrier closed behind him.

He looked through the glass one last time.

Someone on the other side raised a hand.

He did not know who.

He did not wave back.

Ten years earlier, the glass had been on the other side.

Keep going

▶ Play this world
Rate this story
Share

Have a story of your own?

Write an original short story set in an AnyVerse world. The best submissions get published on the site — and the top-rated ones can become playable scenarios.